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Because…
Because I care

Because…
Because I wanted to be there

Because…
Because maybe I’ve cared too long

Because…
Because this is where my heart belongs

Because…
I’ve waited to say this

Because…
I’ve never had a first kiss

Because…
Because the way you make me feel goes unspoken

Because…
I can only give you this token

Because…
I’ve never been this deep

Because…
All the others left me to weep

Because…
Because you’ve cared too much

Because…
Because I just wanna say I love you so much
©2005-2009 ~monogatarithenice
:iconmonogatarithenice:

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*turns away...*
*turns cd player on...to Amurita* 11 days to that song..though that's irrevelant to the poem i made myself submit

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:iconmonogatarithenice:
*makes comment on her on deviation*

god i suck ....

--
Is the sky always this red?
Is the water always this bloody?

Will I ever dream?
No...
Will you ever go?
No...
Will this ever end?
Never...

Will I ever remember how to forget...
:iconshikamarukaos:
lol why so?

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dont let the confusion control u *dances like a monkey* okee kee!
:iconmonogatarithenice:
oh i have no clue :sprint:

--
Is the sky always this red?
Is the water always this bloody?

Will I ever dream?
No...
Will you ever go?
No...
Will this ever end?
Never...

Will I ever remember how to forget...
:iconsaria-the-kokiri:
I like the line about the first kiss, made me smile a little.

I like the repatition of 'because' as well.

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"Remember that you are a human being with a soul and the divine gift of articulate speech: that your native language is the language of Shakespeare and Milton and The Bible; and don't sit there crooning like a bilious pigeon."
:iconmonogatarithenice:
thank you! ^_^ ..and its true i've never had a first kiss >.> :sprint:

--
Is the sky always this red?
Is the water always this bloody?

Will I ever dream?
No...
Will you ever go?
No...
Will this ever end?
Never...

Will I ever remember how to forget...
:iconsaria-the-kokiri:
*cough* Same here *cough cough*

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"Remember that you are a human being with a soul and the divine gift of articulate speech: that your native language is the language of Shakespeare and Milton and The Bible; and don't sit there crooning like a bilious pigeon."
:iconmonogatarithenice:
but your 12 >.> lol

--
Is the sky always this red?
Is the water always this bloody?

Will I ever dream?
No...
Will you ever go?
No...
Will this ever end?
Never...

Will I ever remember how to forget...

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